Score: 5

"Basic"

submission: Gohan's SS Transformation

date: December 15, 2009

For a first flash movie this is acceptable, the art is good with a real DB feel to it and the transition is well done. Overall though it could have had a lot of other little elements to help improve it such as a full body shot instead of a face-shot and some sound effects.

Score: 6

"Basic but well done"

submission: LoopJams-You a Vegetable!

date: December 15, 2009

Simple but still effective. The music was catchy and went well with the bright colours and fruit theme. The loop wasn't exactly necessary but it works well enough, the idea however was a little dry; funny but not overly funny. Enjoyable all over.

Score: 7

"Not bad"

submission: bumblebee

date: December 15, 2009

Simple, all this was was a graphic which changes from a car into Bumblebee the Transformer and then back again when you click on it. The transition was nice and the art was very good with some fine detail, the sound effect however was pretty annoying; the original would have benefited this a lot more.

Score: 0

"Sad"

submission: Fun with Sammy

date: December 15, 2009

This was a stick figure talking through a sped-up Speakonia recording, not exactly original or clever or even amusing. The character ran through different scenes and seemed indifferent to it all, bordering on some slapstick humour and toilet humour which left it with a defined sense of pathetic-ness. This could have used some more time on it.

Score: 5

"Promising but a let-down"

submission: Crazy Lego Junk

date: December 15, 2009

A stack of pictures of LEGO pieces moving so that it had a sort of flow, nice enough idea and it was done well though overall it just felt too short which was a shame since it moved near fluently. Some more attention to the story and length could have made this a classic.

Score: 6

"Alright"

submission: Starfox Vs Falco Round 2

date: December 15, 2009

This had a lazy feel to it, the animation just moved too slow and the ending opened up a plot hole which just heightened the feeling of laziness. The sprites were well chosen though, they still felt too old which gave the flash an overall old feel. Not bad overall but it could have been done so much better.

Score: 5

"Alright"

submission: Don't Poke Dead People

date: December 15, 2009

Basic but the presentation was good with some nice clear graphics, the music was well chosen too which helped to round it off. The punchline was easy to see and because of it, it just took away most of the humour which left it feeling sort of hollow.

Score: 5

"Alright"

submission: matrix spoon bending

date: December 15, 2009

Short with a funny enough punch line. The art was pretty terrible with some squiggly lines, some more attention would have been welcome as well as some proper lip-syncing. Overall though this does its job - and thats to provide a cheap laugh.

Score: 5

"Not bad"

submission: broken minds (preview)

date: December 15, 2009

The darkness that this flash tried to put across was effectively helped by the presentation which was white on black; it really helped to give it an abstract feel and the music did a good of reinforcing it. Overall though it felt too short, as a preview it could have used some more elements to get the viewer interested.

Score: 5

"Bland"

submission: Halo: Outside the Box

date: December 15, 2009

This felt bland overall, the humour didn't work for the most part and the voices were all very similar which made it feel poorly done. The art however was good with some simple yet effective Mast Chief clones and the colour difference was a nice enough touch, it just didn't feel as if it could have been the best it could be.